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- 2025.01.06




Hi, I’m Chaewon. I turned 26 years old just
this year. I live in an apartment in Incheon with my parents and my cat.
I’ve lived We have been living with my the cat for 4 years.
I love animals, so I wanted to learn veterinary
science. But my major is different. I’ve been studying computer science so far.
I will graduate from university next month and start my master’s program in March. To be honest, A new beginnings always makes me nervous, but I’m gonna
make effort to study what I’m interested in. I believe that hard work leads me to great
results.
Someday I hope to work for an IT company.
The competition is fierce in today’s job market, so I study to make my dream a
reality. And that’s pretty much all I have to say about myself.
- 자신의 경험, 성격에 대한 이야기가 추가적으로 들어간다면 좋은 점수를 받으실 수 있을 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
댓글 0개| 번호 | 제목 | 글쓴이 | 조회수 | 날짜 |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 24 | [OPIc] 첨삭부탁드립니다 | Sh | 70 | 2025.01.15 |
| 23 | [OPIc] RE:첨삭답변드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 72 | 2025.01.15 |
| 22 | [OPIc] 첨삭이요 | In | 97 | 2025.01.15 |
| 21 | [OPIc] RE:첨삭답변드립니다. |


























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