토스/오픽 첨삭게시판 토익스피킹&OPIc 연습을 해보고 내가 만든 답안에 대한 의견을 들어보는 게시판 입니다.
인쇄jusinda1 |조회 95| 추천 0
- 2025.01.15
My name is Se Yoon Park.
I turned 15years old just last month.
I live in an apartment in Sejong with my family.
I’m Eojin middle school student.
So I don’t have job.
I think I’m timid.
My hobby is riding a bike and I can feel happy when I ride a bike with my friends.
Someday I want to be a doctor. I know it’s hard to be a doctor.
So I must study hard.
I turned 15years old just last month.
I live in an apartment in Sejong with my family.
I’m Eojin middle school student.
So I don’t have job.
I think I’m timid.
My hobby is riding a bike and I can feel happy when I ride a bike with my friends.
Someday I want to be a doctor. I know it’s hard to be a doctor.
So I must study hard.
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