토스/오픽 첨삭게시판 토익스피킹&OPIc 연습을 해보고 내가 만든 답안에 대한 의견을 들어보는 게시판 입니다.
- 2025.01.17




Hi, nice to meet you eva. So how are you? Eva
I’m pretty good, but honestly I am little bit
nervous right now. But I will try to do my best to answer your questions.
My name is hyojin han, and my English name
is jinny, so you can just call me jinny.
I turned 31 years old this year. And I live
in a house in Incheon with my husband and my lovely daughter.
I received my bachelor’s degree in biotechnology
a few years ago, so I work at a pharmaceutical company. I spend most of my time
at work monitoring pharmaceutical manufacturing processes.
Oh! Let me tell you about what I usually do.
I have several hobbies, but my most recent
addiction is to play with my daughter. My daughter and I spend a lot of time doing
outdoor activites because of my outgoing personality.
Eventually, I’d like to achieve a happy
family. So I will do my best in every moment.
Thank you for listening.
-> 전반적으로 잘 작성해 주셨습니다. 자신의 경험, 성격에 대해 조금 더 구체적으로 설명해 주신다면 좋은 점수를 받으실 수 있을 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
댓글 0개| 번호 | 제목 | 글쓴이 | 조회수 | 날짜 |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 44 | 해커스 토익스피킹 첨삭 해주세요, | 안*진 | 31 | 2025.06.16 |
| 43 | RE:해커스 토익스피킹 첨삭답변드립니다, | 첨삭지기 | 19 | 2025.06.16 |
| 42 | 토익스피킹 첨삭해주세요! | 유*은 | 19 | 2025.06.16 |
| 41 | RE:토익스피킹 첨삭답변드립니다. | 첨삭지기 | 21 |


























인쇄
비밀번호 확인

