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인쇄이지연 |조회 26| 추천 0
- 2025.07.13
오픽 1번 자기소개 첨삭 부탁드립니다!
I am 26 years old. I live with my parents and a cat in a house located in Goyang. The house has three rooms, which is more than enough for the three of us. I like living there because it’s quiet and cozy.
I work as a product manager at a home appliance company. I spend most of my time at work analyzing our products and planning how to market them based on those insights. Since I’m in charge of the entire marketing process for one of our main products, it can be a bit stressful sometimes.
When I want to have some fun, I watch gaming videos on YouTube. Lying down and watching something fun really helps me recharge.
As for my personality, I tend to be a bit introverted. I prefer listening to people rather than doing the talk myself.
In the future, I hope to work for a company related to the food industry, especially in marketing. That’s why I’m currently looking at different companies and getting ready to make a career move
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