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- 2025.10.20




My name is Minsu, and I am 32 years old.
I am a free-lancer. I have worked at Educo for four years.
I work as a freelancer, and I’ve been working at Educo for about four years.
I am a 2nd coach in my company and I teach different level of students of different levels online. online.
I can get a salary as much as I work, so I like my company.
Since my income depends on how much I work, I really like this system because it’s flexible and motivating.
I think I am an introverted person, which is actually a good trait for someone who works online. This is an important trait if you work online.
I live with my family in an apartment. There are five people in my family: my father, my mother, my two sisters and me.
I don’t have any brothers.When I have in my free time, I like to watch enjoy watching movies and dramas a movie or drama.
This is my favorite pastime.
It’s my favorite way to relax after work.
-> 잘 작성해주셨지만 조금 더 자연스럽게 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
댓글 0개| 번호 | 제목 | 글쓴이 | 조회수 | 날짜 |
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| 64 | [OPIc] 업무 관련 내용 첨삭부탁드립니다 | clock | 25 | 2025.12.05 |
| 63 | [OPIc] RE:업무 관련 내용 첨삭답변드립니다 | 첨삭지기 | 35 | 2025.12.05 |
| 62 | [OPIc] 오픽 직장 설명 첨삭부탁드립니다. | clock | 41 | 2025.11.04 |
| 61 | [OPIc] RE:오픽 직장 설명 첨삭답변드립니다. |


























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