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인쇄Kate |조회 30| 추천 0
- 2025.10.24
She works office job from home. (재택근무)
Sometimes she has to show her ID to buy a cigarettes.
She is very upright and always conscientiously. She has a gife for drawing. Her painting was exhibited at an exhibition recently. We live for apart now, but we still keep in touch often and hang out whenever we can.
She is conscientious in all her relationships. She is innocent like a child. She find inspiration in the beauty of everyday life and express it through her paintings.Mny people including myself are moved by her childlike paintings. Her paintings inspire me and cleanse my mind.
Sometimes she has to show her ID to buy a cigarettes.
She is very upright and always conscientiously. She has a gife for drawing. Her painting was exhibited at an exhibition recently. We live for apart now, but we still keep in touch often and hang out whenever we can.
She is conscientious in all her relationships. She is innocent like a child. She find inspiration in the beauty of everyday life and express it through her paintings.Mny people including myself are moved by her childlike paintings. Her paintings inspire me and cleanse my mind.
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| 64 | [OPIc] 업무 관련 내용 첨삭부탁드립니다 | clock | 25 | 2025.12.05 |
| 63 |   [OPIc] RE:업무 관련 내용 첨삭답변드립니다 | 첨삭지기 | 35 | 2025.12.05 |
| 62 | [OPIc] 오픽 직장 설명 첨삭부탁드립니다. | clock | 41 | 2025.11.04 |
| 61 | [OPIc] RE:오픽 직장 설명 첨삭답변드립니다. |
