토스/오픽 첨삭게시판 토익스피킹&OPIc 연습을 해보고 내가 만든 답안에 대한 의견을 들어보는 게시판 입니다.
첨삭지기 |조회 39| 추천 0
- 2025.10.27




It is not too far from the subway station, so I can easily get there. go to the subway station.
The place seemed to have has good great natural lighting and It has a big living room, and a master bedroom room and two smaller rooms. .more small rooms.
There is also a bathroom next to beside the kitchen.
What sets my apartment apart from others is the view of the train tracks in the distance.
Since there are no buildings across in front of my apartment, I have an open view where I can the view is open allowing me to see the field and trains far away.
At night, the trains pass are passing by with their light on, and they a look stunning.
-> 질문에 대한 답변을 잘 작성해 주셨지만 조금 더 자연스럽게 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
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