This picture was taken indoors and the in a workplace. First of all, I can see two people in the middle of the picture, and they are talking with each other in front of the a printer. And there are also two people who is are watching them the scene of these two people. All of them are wearing formal suits. Overall, it seems like a busy workplace.

-> 사소한 실수가 발견되어 수정이 필요했으며, 조금 더 구체적인 묘사가 이루어져야 할 것 같습니다.

※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다