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RE:첨삭부탁드립니다.

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<자기소개>



Let me introduce myself.



Hi my name is 홍길동 and I am 26 years old.



I am currently a student.



I am a junior at 대한민국University.



My major is early childhood education(유아교육과).



I chose this major because I would like to
have a job in this field.



I live with my family and 5 cat cats in a townhouse in seoul.



there are four people in my family my
father, my mother, my other sister, and me.



I think I am a cheerful person.



I have a many friends.



finally when I have free time I like to
meet my friends.



that's all.



 



<학교>



학교 친구 소개



Let me see I Go to 대한민국 university.



During first semester, Well… I met a girl
named
길동 in my major class.



she was alone, so I said how about
making friends with me
I went up to her and asked
if she would like to be friends with me.



she said sure. so we started talking and
now we are friends.



We usually do homework together at school.



She Her house is located near my school,
so I sometimes go to over to visit.



 



<수업>



전공과 전공 선택 이유



I am majoring in early childhood education(유아교육과).



I choose my major because I am interested
in that field.



I want to work for a at a kindergarten(유치원) in the
future.



I am taking several required courses for my
major this semester,



child development, child psychology and
introduction to education.



These subject subjects are very difficult but also very interesting.



 



수업 중 기억에 남는 경험



Well, the most memorable event in a class
was when I gave a successful presentation.



I was taking child psychology that
semester.



I have announced the stages of
psychological development for children by age.



I was so proud of myself. everyone in the
class really praised me.



 



<돌발_은행>



최근 은행에 간 경험



The last time I went to the bank was to
exchange money.



I was confused because it's been a while
since I exchanged.



So i consulted with a bank employee.



The bank employee helped me with exchange.



Thanks to her, everything went very
smoothly.



I was so really grateful to her.



 



감사합니다.


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