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- 2023.10.10




좋아하는 공원
I live in the suburb of Cheongju. The park
is a 20min walk from my house. It is next to the library that I often go to. There
is a large summer house in the center, with a circle walkway. And then, there
are the exercise machine for public use.
It is the only park in the neighborhood, so
I’ll see a lot of people. And I love nature, so I go to the park at least 3
times a week for a walk.
In my opinion, this is an excellent place
to go for a stroll of enjoy nature.
만약, 좋아하는 공원 질문에서 공원에서 하는 활동을 물어볼 때, 위에 말했던 문장으로 똑같이 시작해도 되나요?
공원에서 하는 활동 경향
The park is a 20min walk from my house. I go
there at least three times a week. And I typically go alone.
I go for a stroll in the park in the
evening. The main activity I do at the park is jogging. And if I happen to have
enough energy, I’ll do some exercises on the workout machines. I love my
workouts at the park because I always feel refreshed after my walks. I’d much
rather be out in nature than stuck inside a gym.
나의 쇼핑 습관
Shopping is one of my favorite things to
do, I decide what I want to wear online and try it on in the store. I often check
out different brand apps, I capture clothes I want to buy. And put them in my
photos app folder.
I usually go shopping alone. Because I have
a very clear idea of what I want and it takes a long time to fit. I do this at
least once a month.
I love shopping because after a successful
shopping trip, I feel much more relaxed.
쇼핑하다 겪은 문제
I once had a problem when trying to fit
clothes.
I got dressed, went to look in the mirror
outside, someone I didn’t know entered the fitting room. I thought maybe there
was a fitting room number mix up because it was crowded. But when I went back
in, my phone was gone. So, I looked at the CCTV and he had my phone, and he
walked out.
I kept calling the employee’s phone. And my
parents kept calling my phone.
Finally, my phone was at the bakery. He said,
he picked it up and left it at the bakery.
From this incident, I never leave mine
behind.
나의 집
I live on the third floor of an apartment
with my family. My apartment is quite cozy, and I like living in it very much.
My house has a kitchen, a living room, and 3
rooms. Of those, the room I like the most is my bedroom, which is located right
beside the kitchen. My bedroom is not a large room, but it is my safe haven. It
is a simple room with only the essential like hanger, a desk and a bed. And I love
postcards of my travels, so I have them on the wall. The postcards relax my
mind.
Of all the rooms in my house, my bedroom is
definitely my favorite place to hang out. The only complaint I have is that the
room needs some new furniture. I may put in a new chest of drawers.
과거와 현재 집 비교
Until 1 year ago, I lived in a villa in a
downtown of chengju with my family. It was the place where I grew up, and it
was very different from where I live now.
Back then, I live in a 3 room villa in a
noisy neighborhood. And there was a park nearby, and I’d go jogging everyday.
In contrast, my current home is a large apartment
in a quiet neighborhood. It have many windows, so I often open a window to ventilate.
And it tis a 20min walk to the park, but there is a gym in the apartment. So, I
can workout everyday.
집에서 겪은 문제
A big problem I had with my home was mold
on the walls. I was worried about mold during the rain season, and I did encounter
it.
My mom and I used bleach to clean the mold,
and we opened the windows for good ventilation. Then we changed to new wallpaper,
and we became concerned about the moisture.
I became concerned about humidity in my
house because of this experience.
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