해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 Q11 첨삭부탁드립니다.

Q11. 야외운동 vs 헬스장 운동 중 선호하는 것은?

I think exercise exercising outdoor is better, in better, than exercising in a gym with equipment.

Because I
have a few reason about that reasons to support my opinion. I always driving,
and treasure drive and travel via my bicycle
or my cars, but working out around a good
in a park is really helpful, um helpful for me.

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어떤 식으로 도움되는지 추가되면 좋겠습니다.

and the next reason is that I really like the smell, the fresh airs and of fresh air while exercising outdoors, and I enjoy talk with the neighborhood, and talking
with some talking to my neighbors and having small
chat chats with them, I really like that.
and the last reason is, I'm not the an exercise
person, so I don't like to go to the gym with the
equipment,.

so I don't like do, the inside I’m not a fan of exercising indoors,
I like some,,talking about the people, I rather
enjoy talking with people and discover about something discover things and explore outside.

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말하는 억양과 태도가 자연스럽고 좋습니다. 문법적으로 맞지 않는 표현도 있지만, 크게 신경 쓰이지 않을 만큼
대화하는 것이 자연스러워 유창하게 느껴집니다.