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Opic – 자기소개하기



My name is Jingyu Kim, but you can call me
just Kyu. I’m in my late 20s. I live in an apartment with my parents.



These days I’m looking for a job in the
field of marketing. I’d like to work in this field because my major is marketing.
In my free time, I usually watch movies or go to a café. I like these
activities because they let me kick back and relax. As for my personality, I
tend to be extroverted.



I have large circle of friends and love to
make new friends.



And I’d really like to work for a big marketing
agency. These days, the job market is very competitive and finding a job I want
tis frustrating and confusing process. In order to get into my favorite company,
English is must. That’s why I’m preparing for and taking this Opic test, so
that I can give myself more options.



 



대상 설명하기 – 인물



My best friend’s name is Jaeheon Jeong, and
I’ve known him since I was a high school student. He was a member of the same
club as me, and we have been best buddies ever since the first time we met.
Now, he’s a job seeker like me.



Regarding his appearance, he’s got black
eyes and hair. He is a little short, but he has a muscular body. He’s in late
20’s but looks younger than his age, so sometimes I envy him.



As for his personality, he’s a laid-back
guy who enjoys spending time with a few close friends. He’s also quite
athletic. He’s unstoppable on the soccer field. We hang out with each other all
the time.



What I like the most about him is his kind nature.
He always takes good care of people around him.



When there was a conflict between friends,
his meditation prevented it from getting worse several times. I’m always proud
of him.



 



대상 설명하기 – 장소(집)



The place where I live is an ordinary
apartment in Seoul. The location is very convenient, so I like living here very
much. My house not too far from a subway station and bus stop. Also, there are
many restaurants because the university town is nearby.



My house looks like an ordinary family home.
My house has a living room, kitchen, 2 bathrooms, and 3 rooms. The most special
space for me is my room. My room is relatively small, but that makes me feel
more comfortable. My small room has only the necessary furniture such as a desk
and bed. And during the day, the sun shines better in my room giving me a warm
feeling.



I like this house where I live with my
loving family members. It’s a space that always give me the most comfortable
feeling and I’m always happy when I’m here.   

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