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Opic – 자기소개하기



 



My name is Jingyu Kim, but you can call me
just Kyu. I’m in my late 20s. I live in an apartment with my parents.



These days I’m looking for a job in the
field of marketing. I’d like to work in this field because my major is
marketing. In my free time, I usually watch movies or go to a café. I like
these activities because they let me kick back and relax. As for my personality,
I tend to be extroverted.



I have a large
circle of friends and love to make new friends.



And I’d really like to work for a big
marketing agency. These days, the job market is very competitive and finding a
job I want is a frustrating and confusing
process. In order to get into my favorite company, English is a must. That’s why I’m preparing for and taking this
Opic test, so that I can give myself more options.



->
좋습니다.



 



대상 설명하기 – 인물



My best friend’s name is Jaeheon Jeong, and
I’ve known him since I was a high school student in high school. He was a member of the same club as me,
and we have been best buddies ever since the first time we met. Now, he’s a
job seeker
looking for a job like me.



Regarding his appearance, he’s got black
eyes and hair. He is a little short, but he has a muscular body. He’s in late
20’s but looks younger than his age, so sometimes I envy him.



As for his personality, he’s a laid-back
guy who enjoys spending time with a few close friends. He’s also quite
athletic. He’s unstoppable on the soccer field. We hang out with each other all
the time.



What I like the most about him is his kind
nature. He always takes good care of people around him.



When there was a conflict between friends,
his meditation prevented it from getting worse several times. I’m always proud
of him.



 



대상 설명하기 – 장소(집)



The place where I live is an ordinary
apartment in Seoul. The location is very convenient, so I like living here very
much. My house is not too far from a subway
station and bus stop. Also, there are many restaurants because the university
town is nearby.



My house looks like an ordinary family
home. My house has a living room, kitchen, 2 bathrooms, and 3 rooms. The most
special space for me is my room. My room is relatively small, but that makes me
feel more comfortable. My small room has only the necessary furniture such as a
desk and bed. And during the day, the sun shines better in my room giving me a
warm feeling.



I like this house where I live with my
loving family members. It’s a space that always give me the most comfortable feeling
and I’m always happy when I’m here.



->
잘하셨습니다. 수정할 부분이 별로 없네요!


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