I think exercise, exercising outdoor
outdoors is a much better way to work out.

The reason's reason is that we, um, usually spend most
of our times in time indoors.

so we're so
sick of working inside, or staying in indoor. indoors,
so, when we um, exercise,

when we go outside, we can refresh our
minds or relieving and relieve stress.

so I usually ride a bike, bicycle at the
park, and it is really refreshing with a wind to
feel the breeze.

so I hope you guys really recommend
this.. uh... I highly
recommend it, so I hope you guys can enjoy this too.

Therefore, I believe
exercising outdoors is better.

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