fun places.. there are good to visit in
my hometown is,,One of the places
I would like to recommend is the big park OOOO , near from my home. [또는 A
fun place you can enjoy is the big park OOO near my home/ A fun place which is
good to visit is the big park OOO close to my home]

Because they have really funny outdoor
activities and good facilities.

There are many fun
activities people can enjoy and they maintain good facilities.

We often have festivals
at the park such as music festivals. Sometimes, famous singers come too.

Last time, I even saw OOO.

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funny는 ‘웃긴’이기 때문에 여기서는 fun이
적합합니다.

->
이런 식으로 에피소드나 예시를 곁들여도
좋습니다.

They also have a really big fountain, and..
many benches to rest.. rest on.

so I recommend my this park..