해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 Q11 첨삭부탁드립니다.

Q11. 야외 운동 vs 헬스장 운동 중 선호하는 것은?

I think it is better to exercise in a gym
with equipment.

First of all, you can
exercise regardless of the weather.

because the weather in Korea is very
various,

uh.... and....also, it depends on... the
weather.

Especially, in summer it is very hot,

and in winter, it is very cold,

The summer in Korea is
very hot, and the winter is very cold which make it hard to exercise outdoors.

but if you exercise in the gym, you can
exercise whenever you want.

and the Another advantage of exercising
in a gym is that you can use many a lot of[equipment은 불가산명사] different equipment.

and You can
choose...the equipment according to what muscle you
want to develop.

Therefore, I believe it
is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.