해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 Q11 첨삭부탁드립니다.

Q11. 야외 운동 vs 헬스장 운동 중 선호하는 것은?

I think it is better to exercise in a gym
with equipment.

Let me explain why I think this way.

Most of all, it is more efficient and easy
to exercise if I.. use with a, if I use with equipment if I use equipment.

Because, I
used to exercise in a gym with equipment (three months
ago).

it is more helpful, and I feel like I'm
doing exercise, more...helpful.

I liked using equipment
because it helped me work out effectively.

I could see a big
difference in my body after working out for three months.

->
도움이 되었다고 생각하는 이유를 구체적으로
이야기하는 것이 좋습니다.

On top of that, it is more.. easy to
access, everybody could use equipment. It is easy
to look up on Youtube how to exercise with equipment. Or, you could also get help from professional trainers.

This is why I believe it
is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.