Please
tell me about your house. What’s your favorite room? What does it look like?
Why do you like that room?

The space in my home that What I really love about my home is my
room. 

Actually I live with my parents in a small apartment. It has a living room, a kitchen, and 3 rooms.

So, I have to spend time with my parents
everywhere…. except my room. 

I can spend my own time in my room, So I can feel comfortable and relaxed in my room. I feel just relaxed. 

-> 문장의 흐름 상 위치를 바꾸는 것이 좋을 것 같습니다.

So I like this space . when I am in my room alone, I can do whatever
I want in my roomlike watching Youtube, call talking to my friends on the phone.

and talking with
them… There’s Nothing special, Spending time alone is very important to me.but I just love spending time alone in my room. 

That’s
why I love my room. But, There’s one disadvantage in my room. a bad thing about my room. 

It doesn’t have a bathroom. So I have to go through pass a living room when I want to go to the bathroom. 

So I want a bigger
room with a bathroom. But except that, I love my room. It’s not that much big but It’s perfect for me. just
fit on me.

-> 크기에 대한 부분은 문장의 흐름상 생략하시는 것이 좋을 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.