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RE:opic 해변 관련 질문 답변 첨삭답변드립니다.

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[해변 묘사]: My favorite beach is near my house. It takes only 40 minutes by car from my house. I’ve been went there five times this year. You can eat various kinds of seafood here. I usually eat and go to the beach. The sand there is so soft that you can take off your shoes and walk. Also, you can set off have fireworks at night. So I recently had a fireworks display with my friends. I think having a beach near my house is a really big advantage. And in the summer, you can swim here. Swimming relieves my stress and I even swam for 2 hours a day.

[준비물]: I always make sure to bring two things are a water-proof sunscreen, and a swimming tube. I like water, so I like things in the water. Waterproof sunscreen is a must because the sunscreen sunscreen wear soff if you stay in the water all the time. Also, I like water, but I can't float on the water because I'm not good at swimming. So I always bring a swimming tube.

[해변에서 하는 활동]: The beach I recently went to is Daebu Island. This place is close to my house. I went there with my friends about a month ago. It is very crowded during the daytime on weekends. But I went there on Monday night and there were very few people, so I was very surprised to see it. We went there and ate had a meal first. Because we didn't have dinner. After eating, we stopped by the convenience store to buy ice cream and went to the beach. I couldn't swim because the weather was a little chilly. Instead, we walked for an hour along the coast for an hour and collected clams shells.


[해변 관련 이슈]: It's the a trash problem. People throw the trash anywhere in the park. Also, there are people who take a walk with their dogs. There are cases where a dog owners leave the trash that he or she has cleaned up. So sometimes I step on in dog poop. In order to solve the park's trash problem, install more trash cans. Also, give notice about the trash problem often. When I recently went to Daebu Island, there was a lot of trash around the beach and I could see dog poop. If these things are changed, it could be a better beach.

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