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The Korean government has stepped forward to protect the rights and interests of teenage actors. These actors and actresses are working overnight while filming movies or dramas. This is now being regulated.
Since July 29th, no more teenage celebrities under 15 are allowed to take part in the entertainment business for more than 35 hours a week, and cannot work from 10 p.m. to 6 a.m. Teenagers over 15 are allowed to work 5 more hours and can prolong that time with the consent of their guardian. Too much exposure, lewd acts and skimpy clothing are all out of the question as well.
This act to protect teenagersโ rights has been well received. They say celebrities have their own rights as adolescents to sleep, eat and study. The law prohibits companies from causing them to sleep less, forcing them to go on excessive diets and preventing them from pursuing relationships.
The new policy would enforce a healthier body and mind for the growing teens. Too much work causes problems to oneโs health. Diets could make them undernourished.
In addition, fit teenage celebrities could set a good example to teens who watch them on TV. Singers are very skinny these days and those who watch these scrawny idols want to be like them.
However, there are others who think the new laws are absurd. Many persons in the entertainment industry are against it.
One, they argue regulating teenage actors/actresses is bound to result in pro-blems with filming. If there are scenes of children at night, then the whole script has to be changed. Many directors argue that this is unreasonable.
Also idol groups that need lots of practice need to work overnight sometimes. The new rule would shorten their practice time, and negatively impact their performances. It could bring down the Korean music industry.
Furthermore, the hard-working teens could work as catalysts for others to work harder. Their actions may influence their peers. Limiting their time would limit their hard work.

Debate : A Halt in Teenage Celebrity Activity
The Korean government started regulating entertainment businesses in order to protect teenagersโ rights. The law includes regulation of working time and their acts and clothing. The companies are not happy with this. What is your opinion surrounding this topic?

rights and interests ๊ถ์ต
consent ๋์
guardian ๋ณดํธ์
prolong ์ฐ์ฅํ๋ค
lewd ์ ์ ์ ์ธ
out of the question ๋ถ๊ฐ๋ฅํ๋ค
undernourished ์์๋ถ์กฑ
scrawny ๋ผ๋ง ์์ํ
absurd ๋ง๋ ์ ๋๋
catalyst ์ด์ง์

1. These actors and actresses are working overnight while filming movies or dramas.
โถ์ด ๋ฌธ์ฅ์์ while filming์ ์ ์์ฌ์ ๋ถ์ฌ๊ตฌ๋ฌธ์ด ์ฐ์ธ ๋ฌธ์ฅ์ด๋ค. ์ ์์ฌ๋ฅผ ๊ฐ์กฐํ ๊ฒฝ์ฐ ๋ถ์ฌ๊ตฌ๋ฌธ์ด๋ผ๋ ์ฃผ์ด๋ง ์๋ตํ๊ณ ๋์ฌ๋ฅผ ๋ถ์ฌ๋ก ๋ฐ๊พผ๋ค. ๋ฐ๋ผ์ ์ฃผ์ด์ธ these actors and actresses๋ง ์๋ตํ ๊ตฌ๋ฌธ์ด๋ค.
2. Since July 29th, no more teenage celebrities under 15 are allowed to take part in the entertainment business for more than 35 hours a week, ~
โถ์ฌ๊ธฐ์ take part in์ participate in๊ณผ ๊ฐ์ ๋ป์ด๋ค.
3. In addition, fit teenage celebrities could set a good example to teens who watch them on TV. Singers are very skinny these days and those who watch these scrawny idols want to be like them.
โถ์ฌ๊ธฐ์ those who๋ who~ ์ดํ ํ๋ ์ฌ๋๋ค์ ๋ป์ผ๋ก those๋ ๋ณต์์ด๋ฏ๋ก ๊ด๊ณ๋๋ช ์ฌ ์ฃผ๊ฒฉ์ธ who ๋ค์์ ๋์ฌ๋ ๋ณต์๋ก ์ผ์น์์ผ watch ๊ฐ ๋์๋ค.

์ฒญ์๋ ์ฐ์ ํ๋์ ๋ํ ์ ๋
ํ๊ตญ ์ ๋ถ๊ฐ ์ฒญ์๋ ๋ฐฐ์ฐ๋ค์ ๊ถ์ต์ ๋ณดํธํ๊ธฐ ์ํด ๋์ฐ๋ค. ์ด ๋ฐฐ์ฐ๋ค์ ๋ฐค์ ์ํ๋ ๋๋ผ๋ง ์ดฌ์์ ํ๊ณ ์๋ค. ํ์ง๋ง ์ด์ ๋ ๊ท์ ๋๋ค. 7์ 29์ผ๋ถํฐ, 15์ธ ๋ฏธ๋ง ์ฒญ์๋ ์ฐ์์ธ๋ค์ ์ผ์ฃผ์ผ์ 35์๊ฐ ์ด์, ๋ฐค 10์๋ถํฐ ์ค์ 6์๊น์ง ์ฐ์ํ๋์ ๋ชปํ๋ค. 15์ธ ์ด์์ ์ฒญ์๋ ์ 5์๊ฐ ๋ ์ผ ํ ์ ์๊ณ , ๋ฐฐ์ฐ์ ๋ณดํธ์์ ๋์ ํ์ ์กฐ๊ธ ๋ ์ฐ์ฅ ํ ์ ์๋ค. ๊ณผ๋ํ ๋ ธ์ถ์ด๋ ์ ์ ์ ์ฐ๊ธฐ๋ ๋ ธ์ถ์ด ์ฌํ ์ท๋ ๋ถ๊ฐ๋ฅํ๋ค.์ฒญ์๋ ๋ค์ ๊ถ๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ๋ณดํธํ๊ธฐ ์ํ ๋ฒ๋ฅ ์ ์ ๋ฐ์๋ค์ฌ์ก๋ค. ๊ทธ๋ค์ ์ฐ์์ธ๋ค์ ์ฒญ์๋ ์ผ๋ก์์ ์๊ณ , ๋จน๊ณ ๊ณต๋ถํ ๊ถ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ ์๋ค๊ณ ์ฃผ์ฅํ๋ค. ๋ฒ์ ํ์ฌ๋ค์ด ๊ทธ๋ค์ด ์ ์ ๋ ์๊ฒ ํ๊ฑฐ๋ ๊ณผ๋ํ ๋ค์ด์ดํธ๋ฅผ ์ํค๊ฑฐ๋ ์ฐ์ ๋ฅผ ํ์ง ๋ชปํ๊ฒ ํ๋ ๊ฒ์ ๊ธํ๋ค.์ ์ ์ฑ ์ ํฌ๋ ์ฒญ์๋ ๋ค์๊ฒ ๋ ๊ฑด๊ฐํ ๋ชธ๊ณผ ๋ง์์ ์ค ๊ฒ์ด๋ค. ๋๋ฌด ๋ง์ ์ผ์ ์ฌ๋์ ๊ฑด๊ฐ์ ๋ฌธ์ ๊ฐ ์๊ธฐ๊ฒ ํ๋ค. ๋ค์ด์ดํธ๋ ๊ทธ๋ค์ด ์์์ค์กฐ์ ๊ฑธ๋ฆฌ๊ฒ ํ ์ ์๋ค.์ถ๊ฐ์ ์ผ๋ก, ๊ฑด๊ฐํ ์ฒญ์๋ ์ฐ์์ธ๋ค์ TV์์ ๊ทธ๋ค์ ๋ณด๋ ์ฒญ์๋ ๋ค์๊ฒ ์ข์ ์์๊ฐ ๋ ์ ์๋ค. ์์ฆ ๊ฐ์๋ค์ ๋งค์ฐ ๋ง๋๋๋ฐ ์ด๋ฐ ์์ด๋์ ๋ณด๋ ์ฌ๋๋ค์ ๊ทธ๋ค์ฒ๋ผ ๋๊ณ ์ถ์ดํ๋ค.
ํ์ง๋ง ์ ๋ฒ์ด ๋ง๋ ์ ๋๋ค๊ณ ์๊ฐํ๋ ์ฌ๋๋ค๋ ์๋ค. ์ฐ์ ์ฐ์ ์ ์๋ ๋ง์ ์ฌ๋๋ค์ด ๋ฐ๋ํ๋ค.
ํ๋๋ก, ๊ทธ๋ค์ ์ฒญ์๋ ๋ฐฐ์ฐ๋ค์ ๊ท์ ํ๋ ๊ฒ์ ์ดฌ์์ ๋ฌธ์ ๋ฅผ ์ผ์ผํฌ ๊ฒ์ด๋ผ๊ณ ํ๋ค. ๋ง์ฝ ๋ฐค์ ์์ด๊ฐ ์๋ ์ฅ๋ฉด์ด ์๋ค๋ฉด, ๋๋ณธ์ ๋ฐ๊ฟ์ผ ํ๋ค. ๋ง์ ๊ฐ๋ ๋ค์ ์ด ๊ฒ์ด ๋ถํฉ๋ฆฌํ๋ค๊ณ ์๊ฐํ๋ค.๋, ์ฐ์ต์ด ๋ง์ด ํ์ํ ๊ทธ๋ฃน๋ค์ ๊ฐ๋ ๋ฐค์ ์๋ฉด์ ์ฐ์ตํด์ผ ํ๋ค. ์ ๋ฒ์ ๊ทธ๋ค์ ์ฐ์ต์๊ฐ์ ์ค์ผ ๊ฒ์ด๊ณ , ๊ทธ๋ค์ ๊ณต์ฐ์ ์ ์ํฅ์ ๋ฏธ์น ๊ฒ์ด๋ค. ํ๊ตญ ์์ ์ฐ์ ์ ๋ถ๊ดด ์ํฌ ์ ์๋ค. ๋์ฑ์ด, ์ด์ฌํ ์ผํ๋ ์ฒญ์๋ ์ ๋ค๋ฅธ ์ฌ๋๋ค์ด ๋ ์ด์ฌํ ํ๊ฒ ๋๋ ์ด์ง์ ๊ฐ ๋ ์ ์๋ค. ๊ทธ๋ค์ ํ๋์ ๋๋์๊ฒ ์ํฅ์ ์ค ์ ์๋ค. ๊ทธ๋ค์ ์๊ฐ์ ์ ํํ๋ ๊ฒ์ ๊ทธ๋ค์ ๋ ธ๋ ฅ์ ์ ํํ๋ ๊ฒ์ด๋ค.

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